Sadly I'm not an awesome artist/anatomy expert but except her right feet (angle problem?) everything else looks nice imho maybe something like this [link] would make her right feet look better?
Oh, totally! You should try your hand at drawing it! : D In all honesty I just looked at [link], changing it up to better suit a POV. Nooot my forte, but. Maybe I'll try next time I have some free time. :3